A couple of more edits for the PDF manual:
In section on 5.20, #2 on page 50: The paragraph break after "see Direct Fire Target Density....." does not belong there. (2nd paragraph)
In section 5.23 on digging in, page 55: The paragraph break after "...if it begins that player turn." does not belong there (nor does the period). (2nd paragraph).
I've gone through the manual up to section 13.0 The Editors. I probably won't go through the eidtors for a while now, as I dont expect to be doing any scenario editing for a while.
No offence meant by these notes, These are actually pretty minor and small number of errors.
Also, I've been reading the manual PDF that came with John Tillers Campaign Series, v 1.01. But I also have Talonsoft's West Front hardcopy manual in one room, for perusing, and Talonsoft's East Front II hardcopy in another room. In most respects the manuals are identical (there are some pretty minor differences, -- the main one being the discuasion of the Japanese in the JT's Campaign Series.
Also, I'd be more than happy to review any future manual revision drafts if that would help.
Thanks for updating this game!