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Greetings!

The name's Repporio and I'm considering writing a sort of fan-fic inspired AAR of DW.
I'm playing with a slightly modified version of the Starfall mod on a 15x15 galaxy with 1400 stars and 70 races (including me).
The general settings I'm using are extremely slow tech advancement. 0.5 enforced colonisation range and scarce high quality planets and independent colonies. Oh, and extreme difficulty.
This (to me) gives it a much more "epic" feel to it where every system and mining station is much more important and the map feels much more vast.
For example, here's another game I lost the "feel" for.

After 300 years in-game this was the area I was operating in.
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And this is the explored area.
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I'm not sure how I should write though. How much flavour and informational text. Such as internal politics and history that the game doesn't represent (I'd love to do it but it might be too much to read.) Picture etc.
Any suggestions would be appreciated [:'(]
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Please keep writing this, it looks amazing to have gone through 300 years and only have that much of the galaxy explored!
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HI- I am writing one based on my current game too... got some views so far and NO comments, so I am just going to write it for myself, post when finished. I am interested to see yours though. [8D]
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Read your entire thing yesterday. Was what got me thinking of making this. Working on the map and geopolitics of Sivarkus atm. Will have the basics out by tomorrow I belive [:'(]
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Interesting game settings I might try myself.Won't it kill most of the peacefull empires expansion.
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Alright, here's some basic background info on the world then. If anyone is interested in more info just let me know and I'll make stuff up.

DW History Log:

Basic Stellar Information:
The Sivarkus system, home of the Fironez race, is a system of 8 planets and 7 moons. Out of these planets 2 are gas giants.
2 of the other planets are inhabitable by life where of one, Ljiduf, is a continental world uninhabited by intelligent life and the other, Sivarkus, a marshy swamp planet is the homeworld of the Fironez Race.

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Map of Sivarkus

The Fironez race is a rodent race with a high sense of organisation and are as such great leaders (governors, captains etc).
With this sense they have created a very strict 'class' society with a absolute ruler such as a monarch as the head of state. In some cases these leaders are elected but this is more rare.



History/Politics
Sivarkus has gone without any large conflict for over two centuries.
The last one being a war of succession between the kingdom of Opal and the lesser kingdom of Graval (Now incorporated in to Opal).
The worlds' nations consist of 27 kingdoms located mostly on the pangea like continent spanning around the globe.

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Nation map of Sivarkus (sorry if it's a bit too large[;)]


This peaceful era has brought the worlds' nations closer to one another resulting in a number of alliances and trade networks.
These alliances ultimately led to the formation of the Fironex World Unity. The Fironez World Unity is a Federation of all Kingdoms on the world of Sivarkus.
Its leader is elected from the monarchs of its member states by the leaders of the member states, resulting in 27 votes.
This federation is mainly controlled by five kingdoms.

• Maravia
Maravia, the most southern kingdom on Sivarkus, is a huge industrial nation, producing over 10% of the planets GDP.
It is the home of many of the planets greatest corporations such as Umbalian Mines, Svalian Trade Republic, Heivartian Industries and Jol Resources.

• Yrav
An ancient kingdom compared to the others. Forged out of the vassalisation of surrounding lands it now stands as one of the most influential kingdoms on the planet.
While not having been at war for over five centuries it still keeps a finger in every soup within the federation. Mostly in trade matters.

• Opal
A huge kingdom forged by war and deceit, and also the last nation to join the federation. Their only motive for joining the federation was in order to be able to more easily sway their will upon their immediate neighbours.

• Ryev
By far the most democratic nation in the federation and also its founder. It has long been the hub of 'humanitarian' struggle to ensure planet wide prosperity and try to ensure the sovereignty of each member state is respected. This has led them to be a rival to Opal for many decades.

• Luyen
The technological hub of the federation. Its scientists are known to be the best and brightest the planet has to offer. They are a purely passive nation that refuse to resort to violence. Neither do they have much interest in humanitarian struggles and are quite conservative in this way.


These nations leaders has shared the title in succession of Solverus (President) since the foundation of the federation 235 years ago.


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History Log

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The system of Sivarkus and its location in the galaxy


2100:
The Fironez World Unity with the leadership of Solverus Yorpa Serfu, the monarch of Maravia,
reach out towards the stars and begin construction of the SFSS (Sivarkus Federal Space Station).
A new era has begun for the Fironez race.

At the end of the year the construction of the Sivarkus Star, a construction ship, begins.
This with the ambition to create a much needed Steel mine on Marchom,
the moon of Sivarkus, following the drain of the steel veins in the mines of southern Xal.

With the aim to travel to the different planets around the solar system to widen the federations
resources availability the research of much more efficient engines begun. After reviewing the federal
research budget and efficiency it was soon discovered that for this research project to be finished
within any sort of reasonable time the research capacity has to be increased. This led to the
construction of the FERC (Federal Energy Research Center).


2101:

At the end of the fifth month a small craft is detected in orbit around Sivarkus by radars out of
nowhere. A broadcast from the vessel is soon picked up all around the world.

It states "Greetings to our victims! This is the ship Tenacious Courage of the Firoz Security. You may
have noticed that we are about to attack you. But for a small price of 344 credits per month we could
avoid this unnecessary violence. Are you ready to pay up?"

The Federal government leading monarchs quickly assemble at a crisis meeting. This is intelligent life
from another world opening communications with them, and it is not friendly. Opal wanted to launch all
missile weapons available but Luyen made it clear that if such an action was to be played, the missiles
would not be able to reach orbit before the pirates would be able to attack. And even if not, it is not
certain such weapons would have any effect against an extraterrestrial spacecraft. After a few hours of
arguing the government agrees to pay the 'protection' fee. The ship shortly afterwards begin emitting a
strange energy signal before disappearing.

This was a completely unexpected event embarrassed the government and all leaders agreed that from now
on, the federation will have a dedicated military presence around its home world, to protect from such
fiends which threaten federal sovereignty.


2102:

The construction of the SFSS is finished and its completion is celebrated worldwide. This new frontier
created many new industries and gave a boost to the planets economy. It will now serve as a base of
operations for trade and military in space for the federation. With the construction of the SFSS
complete private investors quickly surged to be the first to hold in their possession, a spaceship to
fuel their need for commerce expansion. The first ship to be created was the Resolution of Sivarkus, a
small freighter controlled by the Svalian Trade Republic. One of the larger corporations on Sivarkus
originating from a trade republic in the northern swamps.

Another ship was completed shortly afterwards. The Cryptic Partisan, owned by Umbalian Mines, a
slightly smaller corporation mainly focusing on mineral production. To no one's surprise the ship was
quickly sent off to extract iridium and gold from the moon, Marchom, in orbit.

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Sivarkus at this moment

On the 19th of Aprilthe construction ship Sivarkus Star was completed and ready for operation. As the
first state owned space ship the government decided to put a captain in charge of the constructor. This
was easier said than done. It took over a week to find someone the kingdoms could agree to be recruited
for space operations. In the end a captain Osu Lapuri was from C'merke merchant navy (which is really a
paramilitary force) was chosen.

On the 7th of June the FERC (Federal Energy Research Centre) was finished. It was quickly put to work
at researching proton ionization. A proposal put forward by the Luyen royal scientists. A proposal
autonomously accepted by all monarchs.

In late June the Sivarkus Star reached the moon Marchom and begun the construction of the mining
station. In an attempt to save some money that was already being trained for the federal treasury the
federation offered the mining station to be controlled by a corporation instead of the state. A offer
quickly accepted by Umbalian Mines which was ,at that very moment, already there conducting mining
operations with mining vessels.

The Kingdom of Opal, backed by a number of other smaller kingdoms, soon came out questioning the
arrangement made with the foul pirates calling themselves the Firoz Security. Solverus Yorpa Serfu
explained once more that until the federation had a defence force positioned in orbit nothing could be
done about the situation.

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Corporations and rich investors in the federal space program begun requesting the state to scan the
planets, moons and asteroids around the solar system. This so that dedicated mining ships could be sent
out to extract the resources present to be sold on Sivarkus afterwards. By this initiative the Yorpa
Surfu with the aid of the federal government begun the construction of the exploration ship The
Morevius. A ship named after the famous explorer by the same name, who explored the isles which is now
known as the kingdom of Oeiran. It was completed a two months later and was immediately sent off to
scan asteroid SJ809.

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In October the mining vessels sent to mine Marchom was reporting their return home. These are the first
manned vessels returning with large amounts of minerals from another celestial body.

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In November the mining station on the moon was completed and the Umbalian Mines immediately started
constructing huge freighter ships meant to haul the steel and gold from the base. This created a small
boom in the economy. The federal government quickly realised the potential of this and made a plan to
build mining stations all around the solar system and maybe, one day, the galaxy.
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How very creative! Loving it- please continue. [8D]
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History Log: 2103-2104

Sivarkus History Lesson 1. - The Federation:
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The Federation was founded by the king of Ryev in the year of 1865. Its' original members were that of Ryev and all of its' bordering neighbours. Originally named the Union of Southern Kingdoms it was meant to be as a means for nations to come closer to each other in the areas of trade and diplomacy. Originally functioning as a kingdom with an elected Solverus (President) to rule without question, as it grew it was forced to reform due to the demand of increased influence the smaller kingdoms. What this created was a federal government where every major decision was voted on, and the Solverus, while still being able to make decisions without being questioned, became more of a honorary title. This reform was enacted 57 years ago, when it only spanned 23 out of the 27 kingdoms. When all kingdoms had joined the federation it renamed itself, in to the Fironez World Unity.


2103:

Early in to 2103 astronomers were able to confirm the existence of space creatures in the Ubalve asteroid belt. Something that could only be described as humongous slugs was drifting through space nearby. This would hinder the federation from mining the asteroids until these creatures has been removed. But this was not the only thing they discovered. In orbit of the gas giant Sivarkus 4s' moons, Acarroud, there was a ship. It did not seem to have any sort of crew since it was stood completely action less for months in a row. The same goes for another ship they found laying in low orbit around the other gas giant, Sivarkus 6. The exploration ship, Morevius, was designated to explore these ships to find out what mysteries they might hold.

In May the interest for the continental world of Ljiduf was growing. Many corporations and even private people showed high interest in being the first Fironez to pioneer and live on another world. This movement quickly gained support from the government and the federal research teams was put to work creating equipment and so forth to make a life on the planet possible.


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Out of the many scientists sent to the FERC one person has proven herself above all others. Her name is Jurki Nobriy and has a special sense for military technology. This has given her an edge in the field. She is also quite patriotic to our cause and is as such less likely to be swayed by foreign influence to reveal state technological secrets. However, no one is perfect. In the High-Tech field she seems restrained and unable to think progress fully. Something that is required of someone in her position. For now the government are unsure what to do with her and are letting her stay at the FERC until further notice.


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As the Morevius was on its way to explore the ship in orbit around Acarroud it was passing Ijiduf and was ordered to take the opportunity to scan the planet for resources. What was discovered was large quanteties of Nekros stone, Carbon fibre, Chromium and Polymer. Resources that would highly and the federations industry and as such a higher initiative towards the colonisation was taken.

Early August a ship from the Firoz Security arrived once more. The moment they appeared the SFSS armed it's weapons and sent a message saying "Greetings!" to the ship marked Tenacious Courage.it floated around for about a week before jumping away.

Following a recent mass migration of population between the kingdoms has led to a more notable mix of cultures in the different kingdoms and has required local governments to change adapt their policies to handle the situation. This has made Solverus Yorpa Serfu significantly more tolerant to different cultures. This might come to aid the federation in negotiations with possible alien states that might be encountered.

2104:


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The ship in orbit around the moon Acarroud was completely destroyed and it would take significant efforts to bring it to any sort of operational level. Most kingdoms was against this idea but Luyen was stubborn and just barely managed to push this proposal through with the aid of Opal, who saw this as a possibility to get their hands on a new powerful weapon. This, however, was not the interesting part of the journey to the other side of the solar system. What was truly interesting was the uncover of ruins on the moon with close similarities to a temple. Inside of it were large amount of information depicted on the walls in a language looking like the ancient languages used by the Fironez millennia's ago. But how could this be? The Fironez race was evolved on Sivarkus and has never left the planet until now. Further investigation is required.
The Information on the walls, though very difficult to decipher, seemed to talk about a technology known as "Warp Field Precursors". This sounded like something out of a fictional fairytale but the scriptures gave enough information for such technology to be real. Back on the home world scientists and politicians alike were drawling over the idea of faster than light travel. Almost as soon as the knowledge was sent home, scientists started working towards creating a prototype of this newfound technology.


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On the nearby moon of Chaulihe pyramids as old (if not older) as the temple was found. Inside of it skeletons of long dead Fironez was found. This is proof. Proof that the Fironez race is not originating from Sivarkus. Or at least that it has been space fairing once before. Deeper in to the ruins a number of artefacts were found.
An emissary from the Firoz Security caught wind of the news, as he was present on the SFSS due to the "protection" agreement. He offered to buy the artifacts for 5000 "credits", which he claims is the galactic currency.
An internal meeting was held to discuss the sale of the artifacts. Luyen demanded to scan them first, so they could be studied and analyzed. Maravia suggested that the pirates are unlikely to offer an honest price, and that they should not trust their initial offer. Opal was awfully silent during this meeting.
The meeting concluded with the decision to negotiate a higher price with the pirates. They managed to bump the price up to 7775 credits, though it is not yet clear how much this is worth yet.


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In August a ship jumps in to orbit for the third time. The SFSS armed its weapons once more, but this time the ship did not appear hostile. Instead of hailing the station with threats and demands it put forward peaceful greetings and requests for trade. Even though the space stations weapon remained armed during the visit. And armed guards was waiting just outside the room the trade was being negotiated, the space ship left in peace. It was the Roaming Wayfarer. The first of its kind to reveal itself to the Fironez World Unity. It was, however, not, the last.

In the last month of the year the Morevius finally reached the ship drifting in low orbit around Sivarkus 6, one of the gas giants in the system. The ship, a small green vessel with rounded edges. It did not seem to be in any sort of disarray and is probably functional. As the Morevius was coming closer a broadcast from the ship was discovered. It was transmitting a message on repeat saying; "This mission is too important for me to allow you to jeopardize it!" The team moved in closer and could clearly state that this was creation of war. Turrets was placed along the side, and while not very large they would easily tear apart anything that the federation has so far built. Across the back of the ship it was written, 'Scourge of Sivarkus' in the same variation of the Fironez language found in the ruins not long ago. A meagre group of 30 men was sent in a pod to board the ship. After a few days of tinkering with the ships systems they got it up and running, and took command of the frigate.
Back home there were immediately arguing of how this new vessel should be used. Luyen wanted the ship stripped apart for technological study while the rest of the nations agreed that this could be the solution to the pirates they had so long been searching for. Yorpa Serfu, the Solverus of the federation quickly set his foot down with the support of all 26 other kingdoms. Luyen would have to back down on their demand. The ship was to protect the home world Sivarkus.


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On top of this, now that the federation finally had a military vessel, they reassigned captain Osu Lapuri from the Sivarkus Star to the Scourge of Sivarkus. With him was a crew of 135 men, proportionally drawn from all kingdoms on his home planet. 5 from each. This was a request by all minor kingdoms and was backed by Opal and Ryev. This is interesting because this is the first time in decades that the kingdoms of Opal and Ryev agreed on a subject.
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I am having fun seeing how close I hit on anticipating where you go with different story elements. I think this is great; and I know you are having fun doing it!
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ORIGINAL: Twigster

I am having fun seeing how close I hit on anticipating where you go with different story elements. I think this is great; and I know you are having fun doing it!

agree. great idea as most DW AARs are pretty functional gameplay and its set up for a more creative treatment
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This is how DW is meant to be played according to me :P
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History Log: 2105 - 2106

Sivarkus History Lesson 2. - Yorpa Serfu:

Yorpa Serfu, the Solverus (President) of the Sivarkus World Unity was born in eastern Maravia 2060 and was educated at the finest business school in the kingdom. He was raised by his parents, the owners of (back then) one of the most successful corporations around called Serfu Transports. A merchant corporations which was hired to transports goods all across the southern sea. During his years in university he developed in to what some people would describe as a spoiled brat, and begun to use his fathers' influence to gain favours. He ended up in the wrong groups of people and became a partying alcoholic.

As he came in to adulthood his parents corporation started to fall apart and soon sold it to their rivals. With the loss of the money and influence his parents had given him he was forced to sober up. A few years later he emerged as a grown up man with a life-experience in both the business of the world as well as the dark clubs in the slums. He decided to go in to politics and was 2094 elected monarch of the kingdom of Maravia. A few years later in 2098, he was elected the leader of the federation, following the murder of the previous. But it seems that the people who murdered the previous Solverus was not satisfied, and he spent his first year in charge dodging assassination attempts. This has led him to become a paranoid character constantly looking over his shoulder for shadows. However, despite all this, he is a successful politician who knows how to get his will through and currently sit as Maravias representative in the federal government as well as Solverus of the federation.


2105:

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At the beginning of 2105 the federal government considered changing their policy of a low tax to stimulate population growth. Following the construction of the SFSS and the Sivarkus Star expenses had skyrocketed. The expenses well outweigh the income and it is just a matter of time before the state reaches bankruptcy. A meeting was held about the issue and all nations agreed that something had to be done. While Ryev and some other kingdoms proposed a immediate tax increase the Maravian representative pointed out that the small money made from customs of the minerals brought by freighters would keep the economy floating for at least another year. The decision was made that by June 2106 the taxes would be increased to 40% from the 15% it is standing at now. This would surely make the populace angry but such is life on Sivarkus under the rule of the federation.
In an attempt to artificially increase the bonus income from trade Yorpa Serfu the construction vessel Sivarkus Star was sent to build a mining station on Ijiduf. This the state believed would encourage corporations to build freighters, which would in turn lead to larger toll income.

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In September the exploration vessel Morevius reached the Ubalve asteroid belt. After a quick scan of the rocks they proved to be mostly containing basic minerals not high on the states' priority list. However, when the federation finally choose to expand, this asteroid belt will play an important role.
When in the belt they also got a good look at the slugs that had been detected two years earlier. They were humongous with large teeth with similarities to leeches. Shortly after the Morevius arrived within sight distance from the slug it started moving towards it. How its movements reminding of a swimming snake is helping it to move in the vacuum of space is unsure, and must be researched further. For now, the exploration ship was ordered to withdraw from the asteroid belt and go on scanning the remaining celestial bodies in the solar system.

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Around this time the state finally reached negative influx of money. It would seem that the Maravian representative was wrong when it came to the bonus income delaying the bankruptcy by a year. This did not amuse the rest of the federal government to say the very least. While money don't actually mean anything unless they are actually to be used, having money would be quite useful in case of a unpredicted situation. The plan to wait until June next year to raise taxes did not cut it. On the 29th of October taxes were raised from 15% to 45% to fill the needs of the federations budget. This did, just as predicted, infuriate the population. Mass demonstrations were held at every major city and resulted in riots and destruction of state property worldwide. Police and in some cases military was sent in to put down these riots in what was possibly the greatest military activity against civilians ever on Sivarkus.

2106:


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On the 30th of Mars, Heivartian Industries announced the opening of the first factory to produce Multi-mite Inducers. This new product they state will be used in planned future technology under development by the corporation. What new technology remains unclear but is also irrelevant at the time being.


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Later that year an exploration ship of the Firoz Security arrived. Unlike the pirate's previous ships this one had an appearance reminding of that of an avian. It was golden with a peaked front and massive wing like structures beaming out from either side. The ship hailed the federal space station claiming the ships' title as 'Lyras Junction Vagrant' and demanded landing rights. To the control towers surprise the voice, while speaking a understandable tongue, used a extremely strange accent seeming emulated by a computer. Their suspicions proved true when the explorer came closer to the station and was put through a basic scan. The ships entire interior was filled with water and used advanced gravity generators to simulate the pressure of a deep ocean. In the water hundreds of life forms were swimming around seemingly tending to the ships' systems. Was this really the crew? Over the radio they declared their race named Oomik and required the station to refuel their vessel.


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The Oomik race.

All of the federal government found this an insult to the federations sovereignty and its people's honour. With Yravs' proposal to end the treaty with the "Space travelling prats" a message to cancel the treaty was sent, but not without the much strange opposition by Opal. Within a few moments a reply was heard. "We are glad to rid ourselves of this worthless treaty! Our fleets will soon arrive to end your miserable lives in your disgusting swamps." Shortly after they had received the message the stations' sensors picked up a signal coming from the explorer. This was surely the relaying of the message to the headquarters of the pirates. When the station reported that the signal the stopped they were ordered to open fire upon the ship. Within moments, the beautiful birdlike vessel was obliterated by lasers from the SFSS. Whether this was a wise choice or not, the deed had been done.

Following this de facto declaration of war against the Firoz Security a general and a captain was decided to be recruited for the federal forces. At the very meeting where this idea was proposed both Yrav and Opal put forward three options each. All of them from their own military cabinet. Ryev instantly grew suspicious of this and demanded that the chosen ones would be from one of the minor countries. A demand that was ignored. In the end one of Yravs generals named Dekshi Matado, and a Opal captain named Olbar Thanda were selected.


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More so, an agent of Maravia named Lutar Zabros was put in duty of the federation as well. He was put to use immediately. By hitching a hike with one of the independent traders passing by to drop off some goods he set off on his mission to uncover the main base of the Firoz Security, and by doing so being the first of Sivarkusian to leave the system for who knows how long. This is a extremely risky mission with little chance of success, but it is clear that the survival of the federation might depend on it.


In late September the construction vessel construction ship 'Sivarkus Star' reached Ijiduf after almost two years of travel and began construction of a mining station. These news took the state off guard. An mining station far out in the solar system would be most difficult to protect and would spread federal resources thin. To combat this a frigate was ordered for construction. The first military space vessel constructed by the federation. It was named 'Defender of Ljiduf' after the planet it was built to patrol and was designed to hold a whole of 10 beam canons. While it might not be a great challenge to the pirates it will surely appease the masses as an attempt to represent the federation in space.
All that could be done now is to wait and see how the pirates will react...


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Map of the Sivarkus system at this moment.
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This is awesome!! You've put alot of effort in. More please [:)]
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Fabulous work!
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History Log 5: 2107-2108


2107:

Late January the mining station on Ijiduf was completed and the extraction of the planets' resources could begin. This new mining station would surely result in a increase of ships constructed by the private sector. Something that will add a nice little sum to the federations income. Furthermore, the granting of the Marchom mining station to Umbalian mines has resulted in widespread demand that all mining stations the federation construct in space shall be owned by corporations.

This quickly became a large discussion in the federal government where Opal, Yrav and Luyen was against the idea, while Maravia, Ryev and most lesser kingdoms was for it. Opal with their authoritative nature argued that letting private corporations control the mining stations, which will in a very near future be the main material income, would surely lead them to demand more representation in federal politics. Luyen and Yrav on the other hand argued more that corporations only care about profit and will not do what is best for the federation. What stops them selling the resources to the pirates? Ryev, which has never really been a mercantile nation came with some arguments that "the production should be controlled by the people." Something most other nations not originally a member of the federation simply shrugged off as silly thoughts. Maravia on the other hand has a long standing history when it comes to corporations and industries and has solved many similar problems within their kingdom. They soon came to put forward a proposal. All mining stations shall be owned and maintained by the private sector. However, they shall only be allowed to trade with the federation unless specifically stated otherwise by the federal government. More so the federation will have a constant presence of troops at all mining stations. And when it comes to the corporations wanting more representation in the government, he decided to set up a council where all corporations owning stations in space will sit, to give advice to the federal government. With the gained support of Ryev, Luyen and Yrav this proposal was put in effect and the Corp. league.

With the Corp. league set up the next order of business was to come up with a system of how the stations will be designated an owner. The Marchom mining station was bought by Umbalian mines however much has changed since that time. The decision was made that in order to own a space station the corporation first and foremost have to fill two requirements. Being able to maintain the station independently, and have sworn loyalty to the federation effectively making them a part of the governmental body. Meaning that the state will be able to seize the station in case of emergency. If a corporation fill these requirements they can be elected by vote in the federal government.

Once all the bureaucracy around the station had been complete the state had to vote in a corporation to maintain it. This was surprisingly easy and all major kingdoms agreed that Jol Resources, a smaller corporation than Umbalian Mines, was the best choice.

About a quarter in to the year t he Scourge of Sivarkus reached the homeworld. Great celebrations were held as well as a huge parade while the spacecraft was hovering above the federal capital with all of its' splendour.

As predicted the mining station on Ijiduf resulted in the construction of many more freighters to transport the extracted resources which in turn resulted in a boost to the income generated from the SFSS.


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On the 27th of June the Solverus Yorpa Serfu was found dead in his bed at federal headquarters. It struck the federation hard and by surprise. No one had expected Serfu to die so unexpectedly and by doing so he had put the federal government in turmoil. Upon the previous Solvarus death, a new one is to be elected as fast as possible. This resulted in political chaos upon which the monarch of Yrav, Nachis Unkaro, was elected to lead the federation. This man, who is known for being disorganized will not bring any good to the federation. With little knowledge of how the space industry works his leadership will slow expansion considerably.


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The election was a joke to say the least, where no one had actually proposed themselves. The election was held blindly without any real advertising of the candidates and Nachis Unkaro won with a majority when having only four votes for himself. The rest were spread out between the other major kingdoms and many lesser kingdoms voted for each other solely to gain favour.


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With the death of the previous Solverus new characters saw their chance to get in to politics. This lead to the young man Xo Serfu (Not related to Yorpa Serfu) being recruited in to be the first interplanetary ambassador of the federation. Even though no foreign nations except for the Firoz Security had been discovered yet, his position was most valuable.

The morning on the 8th of August, was just like any other morning. Freighters were taking off to transport goods from the mining stations. Ships were transporting passengers to and from the SFSS which was orbiting calmly around Sivarkus as the sun rose on the horizon. The monarchs of the federation assembled in the chamber to discuss appropriate events and proposals. Everything was just like any other morning. However, early afternoon, the SFSS detected strange energy fluctuations in orbit around Sivarkus. Energy fluctuations that has only been seen when one of the pirate ships had jumped in to orbit. Although it resembled that of a pirate ships FTL arrival, it could surely not be. No pirate ship could be this large. It would mean it was almost half as large as the SFSS. The captain of the space station was sure that this could not be the case, but still kept a close eye on the energy spikes. But soon, everything would change. Just past afternoon central federation time, a massive ship arrived in orbit around Sivarkus. It flagged the mark of the Firoz Security. The pirate faction the federation had attacked but a year ago, and now they were here for revange.


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Panic quickly spread among the freighters and miners in orbit who desperately tried to evade the ship and get away. The SFSS, now retrofitted to be able to defend the home world from any and all attackers launched a volley of missiles towards the enemy. Before too long, a new signal was received at the space station. It was captain Osu Lapuri in the Scourge of Sivarkus, who was arriving from the far side of the planet, and was ready for battle. As the missiles and the Scourge of Sivarkus was travelling towards the ship, the vessel turned around and started moving towards the moon. The only aim with this could be to attack Marchom mining station, a civilian target. Within moments of reaching the moon, an array of lasers rained death upon the moons' surface.


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The mining colony was lost, along with hundreds, if not thousands of lives. As the Scourge of Sivarkus arrived a battle began in orbit. However, the shields of this massive pirate ship was far too superior for anything the federation could field and the federal frigate was forced to withdraw. Without the Scourge of Sivarkus to stand between the SFSS and the pirates, it moved towards the planet. Upon its' arrival, despite the station firing missiles point blank upon the enemy, it unleashed a volley almost ripping the station in half. Reluctantly and humiliated, the federal government sent a message of surrender to the pirates. The terms were put at a fee of 1810 credits per month. Enough to build a frigate once per month. But what was the federation to do? They could not fight off such a superior force. It will be a long time until any resistance will be put again.

As soon as the massive ship had left orbit, reconstruction efforts began. The SFSS and Scourge of Sivarkus had been severely damaged and the Marchom mining station had been completely obliterated. This was a huge setback for the federation but they will however not be demoralised. Instantly the reconstruction efforts began and the Sivarkus Star was ordered to construct a new mining station on Marchom to replace the old one. However, it was soon discovered that the massive ship was still present in the solar system near the Ubalve asteroid belt. Even if this made the government and the population feel unease, nothing can be done about this at the moment.


Furthermore, just after the attack the reason for it was discovered. The intelligence agent Lutar Zabros, sent out to obtain the territorial map of the Firoz Security, returned almost entirely empty-handed. It was soon discovered that he had been found out and bribed in to aiding the pirates with vital information about the SFSS' stations' design as well as military protocols. This was seen as a disgrace to all of the federation and he was executed for high treason.


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However, his death was not entirely pointless. While he had not discovered any of the pirate bases, he had found the home-world of the Oomik race. Far south-east east in a system known as the Ooman system laid the ocean world of Ooman 4. The home world of the Oomik with a total of 317 million of their species. Opal swore that one day this world will be under Fironez rule.


2108:


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Following the defeat of the federation at Firoz Security hands in late 2107 the five major kingdoms started discussing reforming the federation in to a republican dictatorship where the Solverus once more reigns without question. This system, which had been in place not long ago, would make it easier to maintain the ships and bases now in place as well as speed up research in vital areas.

This however, was not all. While Nachis Unkaro was the current Sovlerus of the federation the monarch's of Opal, Maravia and Ryev agreed that he was not 'suitable' for the job and had to be removed. And so, on the 15th of August, the day after Nachis Unkaro signed the reformation of the empire, he was shot by Opal agents. Who was to replace him, would be a question for another time. For now a combined regency council by the monarch's of the plotting nations was put in place.

Furthermore the smaller nations of the now republican Sivarkus found this outrageous and threatened to rebel but the declaration of a unholy military alliance between Opal, Maravia, Ryev and the now pupated nation of Yrav made short work of this. Following this new alliance most smaller nations were forced in to becoming puppets. That except for the neighbours of Ryev who were 'put under their protection' which essentially meant the same thing.

Luyen, which refused to raise arms against anyone was the only one not taking any nations under their wing. The result of this massive political change was effectively 4 super states on the planet of Sivarkus, not counting in Luyen. While they had already been the one dictating the future of the world they could now do so unquestioned. This new political change did however not change the position of corporations and their business in space.

In an attempt to strike hope in its population the newly formed republic the ordered the construction of the unmanned exploration ship 'Cheerful Impulse' on the 20th of February, who was to be sent to one of the nearby star systems on a one way trip to explore its celestial bodies. The ship was completed on the 25th of Apil and was immediately sent off on its' quest. The trip is estimated to take many years and is presumably one way. More so, the vessel will run out of fuel before reaching its' target and will have to use reserve power to make the last of it.

After having suffered such a humiliating defeat the federation took a much more active initiative, and ordered a mining station to be built on Sivarkus 4. A gas giant filled with Hydrogen, Magneton, red plasma and Caslon. All of which will be highly useful in the near future.


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More so, with the threat of the pirates gone, for now, a weapon research station was queued to be built on Sivarkus 6, the other gas giant in the system. This planet contained special gases in its atmosphere which would surely aid the research of military equipment and weapons.
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It's been a busy week but now I'm back to writing [:'(]
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I am extremely happy to see that people are still active on the distant worlds forums. I plan to do do a write-up fan story of my own soon after being inspired by your own, Kingah. [:D][:D]
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